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OUR STEPS TOGETHER, EVEN WITHOUT WINGS

OUR STEPS TOGETHER, EVEN WITHOUT WINGS
By Minh Nguyen

GENRE: Animation, Period Piece
LOGLINE: When a wounded boy learns to carry a girl who can no longer walk, their journey across land and sky becomes a quiet ode to love, memory, and the courage to move forward — even without wings.

SYNOPSIS:

In a small seaside town, Takao, a 19-year-old boy, moves through life like a ghost wearing confidence as a disguise. Among his loud, careless friends, he laughs without joy. At home, silence fills the walls. He feels alive only when he runs, but even then, he does not know what he is running toward. One day, he sees her. Yuna, sitting quietly in her wheelchair in the small handmade bracelet shop run by her mother, is sketching the sea after the rain. She lost the use of her legs in a car accident, yet she seems to live closer to the wind than anyone else. She listens to the world, to the birds, the waves, the whispers of things most people forget to notice. Their first exchange is brief. A shared glance. Then, slowly, their words find rhythm. Takao begins to visit her, first out of curiosity, then out of something deeper he cannot name. With Yuna, he does not need to pretend. And with him, she rediscovers the possibility of being seen, not pitied. One day, Yuna makes him an unexpected proposal: “I want to walk with you. Everywhere. And I want to create, with you.” When Yuna confides that she dreams of seeing the ocean again, Takao makes a decision. With his hands, he sews a handmade harness, a soft sling of fabric and leather that allows him to carry her on his back. From that day on, they walk together. Through the markets, across fields, into the mountains, all the way to the shore. At every place they visit, they choose a fragment of the world: a shell from the sea, a smooth stone from the mountain, a piece of polished glass from the city, a seed from a field. Back at the shop, Yuna threads them one by one onto a bracelet that was once empty. Their journey becomes a creation. Their love becomes a trace. Scenes of tenderness unfold: – Takao carrying Yuna beneath a summer storm, both laughing under a shared umbrella. – Yuna pointing to a candy in a shop window, and Takao silently placing it in the basket. – The two of them watching clouds drift by, her head resting on his shoulder. Their bond becomes something sacred, fragile, and real. Takao learns to feel without fear. Yuna learns that her body is not a limit, but a vessel for love. Yet time, as always, demands its truth. Takao is accepted to study far away. For the first time in his life, he is not running, he is choosing. Yuna understands. Not with sadness, but with strength. On their final walk together, he carries her one last time to the sea. The bracelet is now complete. Yuna gently ties it around his wrist. She whispers: “You taught me how to walk again.” He answers: “And you taught me how to fly… even without wings.” Takao leaves to build his future. Yuna remains facing the ocean. It is not a goodbye. It is a passage. Later, Takao keeps traveling. And sometimes, alone, he adds a new fragment to the bracelet. DIRECTOR’S NOTE This film is about the kind of love that does not cure you, but teaches you how to live with your scars. Takao and Yuna are two broken pieces that fit, not because they complete each other, but because they choose to walk together. ESSENCE Our Steps Together, Even Without Wings is a story about tenderness, resilience, and the quiet courage of love. It is not about grand gestures or miracles, but about the beauty of carrying someone, and the grace of being carried. Because sometimes, walking together is already a form of flight. Visual Style: Inspired by Seong Ryul, pastel tones, soft light, slow and delicate framing. Music Mood: Dreamy and organic, Masakatsu Takagi (Nene), (Lullaby In the Peaceful Light), (Maternity Sky).

Kakha Beridze

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Kseniia Zhuravleva

Hi Koby, I’ve only read the logline and it’s just amazing!

A fantastic idea and a clearly formulated logline. The only thing that could be clarified: did the girl fear pursuing her dreams earlier, or did she actually try and fail?

Based on the logline, I’m expecting a romantic drama like We Live in Time or The Life List, is that right?

It’s very dramatic that the protagonist loses the ability to walk, but then finds someone who is willing to 'support' her in a literal sense, and that’s when she gains the courage to pursue her dreams.

Kseniia Zhuravleva

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Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins

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Maurice Vaughan

Wow! Unique concept, @Koby! I can't wait to watch this!

Minh Nguyen

Hi @Kseniia, thank you so much for your kind words, they truly mean a lot to me.

Regarding your question: Yuna did try to pursue her dreams before, but life, and later her injury, slowly convinced her that they were no longer possible for her. It’s not so much a single failure as a quiet accumulation of moments where she learned to step aside.

This story is indeed a romantic and emotional journey, but one that unfolds gently, through small gestures and shared moments rather than grand drama. Takao doesn’t “save” her, he walks beside her, and through that shared movement, she slowly finds the courage to believe in herself again.

I’m deeply touched that the logline resonated with you. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.

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Tasha Lewis 2

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Minh Nguyen

For those who stay until the very end…

There is one last quiet moment.

POST-CREDITS SCENE

No music.

A close shot.

A hand.

A bracelet around his wrist.

A pen.

A notebook.

He is in class.

We never see his face.

Only the movement of his hand as he writes.

The bracelet brushes the paper with each word.

Cut.

Yuna sits in her wheelchair, inside her mother’s bracelet shop.

Soft light. Silence.

A pencil.

A sheet of paper.

She begins to write.

She smiles — almost imperceptibly — and whispers:

“My dear Takao…”

Cut to black.

Kevin Lenoble

It's simply magnificent, so sweet, I felt every word, everything from the meaning of the title to the idea of ​​the story and even the post-credits scene, you made me shed a tear of joy...

Minh Nguyen
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