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In a cybernetic and emotionally sterile future, the memory of a stillborn twin is secretly implanted into the mind of her surviving sister. The experiment is believed to have failed. But the second consciousness is alive, silent, haunting, and growing. As the girl matures, she feels the presence of her twin in every thought, every gesture. A ghostly bond forms: painful, intimate, unspoken. Through a final digital message from their deceased mother, the unnamed twin receives her name at last — Tarah. JUMELLES is a poetic and psychologically intense film about identity, grief, and invisible love, where silence, memory, and shadow compose the soul.
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Amaizing love it !!
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Nice concept and universe like Blade Runner
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Je trouve le concept très innovent, cela donne envie de voir un tel films. Bravo
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Minh Koby
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I think your logline needs to be tightened up, Koby Nguyen, but what a concept! I'm looking forward to watching this!
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This is a chilling and experimental high concept idea. I do agree with Maurice that it needs tightened up some. The concept is so good that I couldn’t resist giving you 5 stars!
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