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J U M M E L S

J U M M E L S
By Koby Nguyen

GENRE: Sci-fi, Film-noir
LOGLINE: In a cybernetic future, the memory of a stillborn twin is secretly implanted in her sister’s mind. Thought to be a failed experiment, the second soul awakens. As the girl matures, she feels the other’s silent presence, haunting, guiding, resisting. A story of dual identity, invisible grief, and the impossible bond between two minds sharing one body.

SYNOPSIS:

In a cybernetic and emotionally sterile future, the memory of a stillborn twin is secretly implanted into the mind of her surviving sister. The experiment is believed to have failed. But the second consciousness is alive, silent, haunting, and growing. As the girl matures, she feels the presence of her twin in every thought, every gesture. A ghostly bond forms: painful, intimate, unspoken. Through a final digital message from their deceased mother, the unnamed twin receives her name at last — Tarah. JUMELLES is a poetic and psychologically intense film about identity, grief, and invisible love, where silence, memory, and shadow compose the soul.

J U M M E L S

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Kilian Lezay

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Kilian Lezay

Amaizing love it !!

Lucas Nascimento

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Lucas Nascimento

Nice concept and universe like Blade Runner

Abdusamad Shafiev

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Koby Nguyen

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Louis Furnez

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Andrea Coda

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Andrea Coda

Je trouve le concept très innovent, cela donne envie de voir un tel films. Bravo

J.west Junior

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Ivan Brdg

Waw

Kaily Nguyen

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Koby Nguyen

Thank you so much for taking the time to read, comment on, and rate my projects.

Every bit of feedback, every word, and every perspective means a great deal to me. Your remarks, encouragement, and even your constructive criticism inspire me to push my writing and cinematic vision even further.

I am truly grateful for your support and attention, and I hope my films can touch you as deeply as your messages touch me.

I look forward to connecting, learning from you, and, who knows, maybe collaborating on new cinematic dreams in the future.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart to the entire Stage32 community.

Minh Koby

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Maurice Vaughan

I think your logline needs to be tightened up, Koby Nguyen, but what a concept! I'm looking forward to watching this!

David Williamson

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David Williamson

This is a chilling and experimental high concept idea. I do agree with Maurice that it needs tightened up some. The concept is so good that I couldn’t resist giving you 5 stars!

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