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PROXIMAS'DIVINE: THE ALPHA AND THE OMEGA

PROXIMAS'DIVINE: THE ALPHA AND THE OMEGA
By Alex Bridge

GENRE: Science Fiction, Mystery
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When bioengineered imperial scouts encounter the last humans on a ruined Earth, they uncover betrayal within the Empire as their loyalty fractures — just as a secret experiment unleashes Omega, a godlike force beyond control.

TAGLINE: Perfection bows to no one.

SYNOPSIS:

In a distant future, humanity no longer belongs to Earth.

After a catastrophic ecological collapse forced the species underground, the few surviving humans live hidden in scattered high-tech bunkers while the planet above has become hostile and unpredictable, dominated by violent storms, mutated predators, and strange phenomena.

Light-years away, the powerful Golden Eye Empire of Proxima Centauri B expands across the galaxy through its military and an elite exploratory order known as the Frontier Recon Scouts (FRC).. Created by the brilliant imperial scientist Varis Anda, the FRC are a lineage of bioengineered operatives designed to explore dying planets, restore them, and claim them for the Empire. Each unit functions as a coordinated organism, linked through a neural system known as the Shared Thought, and armed with a unique psionic weapon called the Andavar.

When Unit Alpha arrives on a devastated world later revealed to be Earth, the mission seems routine: assess the planet, eliminate threats, and prepare it for imperial reclamation. But the encounter with the planet’s last surviving humans, along with the discovery of imperial schemes woven against them, begins to fracture the Scouts’ relationship with the Empire they serve. What begins as a reconnaissance mission slowly evolves into a moral conflict that threatens to divide the unit and destabilize the ideology that created them.

Yet the greatest danger does not lie on Earth.

Far from the ruined planet, deep beneath the imperial palace in Centaurus, a forbidden project is underway. Miyat, a brilliant scientist with a questionable moral compass, once trained by Varis Anda and now forced to serve the Emperor, is tasked with creating a new soldier for the Empire. Instead, he secretly aims to create Omega—an unprecedented life form designed to transcend the limits of biology, morality, and control.

As the FRC’ mission unravels and political tensions within the Empire rise, the birth of Omega approaches—an entity whose godlike nature may reshape not only the Empire, but the future of the entire Universe.

Marcos Fizzotti

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Oleg Mullayanov

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Michael Dzurak

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Sijun Cui

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Sijun Cui

Excellent work!

Alex Bridge

Thank you so much Sijun Cui ! The story is quite layered and complex, so I had to leave out many intriguing elements,otherwise there simply wouldn’t have been enough space to fit everything in

Tasha Lewis 2

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Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

Really interesting, unique concept, Alex Bridge! I suggest making your logline shorter. I don’t think you need “The interstellar empire of Proxima B is ruled by order, beauty, and technology” in the logline, and I suggest adding the story goal.

Jay A Swendris

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Robyn Henderson

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Arthur Charpentier

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Alex Bridge

: ) thanks! Arthur Charpentier

Vijay Kumar

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Vijay Kumar

Great work

Alex Bridge

many thanks Vijay Kumar ! It took me years to write it.

Abhijeet Aade

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Abhijeet Aade

Hi Alex Bridge,

This sounds like a very expansive sci-fi concept. I like the scale of the world you’re building, especially the idea of bioengineered scouts discovering the last humans on a ruined Earth while political tensions grow within the Empire. The moral conflict within Unit Alpha and the emergence of Omega as a godlike entity create a strong sense of stakes for the larger universe of the story.

The combination of empire politics, advanced technology, and philosophical themes about control and evolution makes it feel like a story with a lot of potential depth. Wishing you the best as you continue developing this project.

Alex Bridge

Hi @Abhijeet, thank you for the thoughtful comment.

The project is actually based on my novel and the real climax of the story arrives at the very end of the book, which in the series structure would essentially become the starting point of Season 2. Of course, many intriguing events and turning points happen before that, gradually building the larger conflict and characters arc.

Themes like the relationship between ethics and science, and the tension between command, duty, and personal feelings are things that deeply fascinate me and that I wanted to explore through this story.

Nate Rymer

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