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On the run with stolen money, a fractured mother and daughter enter a looping desert where their own doubles hunt them—and survival means becoming whole again.
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Rebecca and her estranged daughter Matilda are on the run across the Arizona desert, carrying stolen cash and the fragile hope of starting over. Their journey takes a surreal turn when an isolated gas station appears along an endless highway: a place that shouldn’t exist.
From that moment on, reality begins to collapse.
Trapped inside a shifting liminal space that behaves like a puzzle, Rebecca and Matilda are forced to follow a set of hidden rules: solve the clues, keep moving, don’t get caught.
Because if one of their Doubles reaches them first, she'll becomes them.
As the environment transforms from burning desert to arctic void, the two women are pushed into a psychological and emotional reckoning with their shared past, their betrayal, and the love they never managed to repair.
To escape they must break the loop, outwit their Doubles, and rediscover their bond.
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thank you very much for voting! : ) Michael Dzurak Shanan Samuels Oleg Mullayanov
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I'm REALLY looking forward to watching Asphalt Loop, Alex Bridge! I like the title!
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thanks a ton Maurice Vaughan ! The original title was "the demon of time", but Asphalt Loop is cooler huh?! : )
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thank you very much for ur support! Kakha Beridze Marcos Fizzotti Maurice Vaughan
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You're welcome, Alex Bridge. I think Asphalt Loop is cooler and catchier.
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thank you Michael Dzurak I just uploaded the last version of my screenplay.
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This sounds very cool Alex Bridge !
It is! :) Many thanks, Leonardo Ramirez
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thank you Arthur Charpentier
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thanks for voting Tasha Lewis 2
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Good work
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thank you Nate Rymer
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I love it, it's very original.
thank you very much, Minh Nguyen