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JODY, A SLIP IN THE WINDOW

JODY, A SLIP IN THE WINDOW
By Daniel Doble

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

When a 16-year-old girl is violated by her dad, she is forced to decide between keeping the peace and risking everything to bring her dark reality into the light, and one day reclaim her future.

SYNOPSIS:

ACT ONEIn a small, heat-soaked Texas town, teenage Jody Johnson balances on the thin line between childhood innocence and the dangers lurking inside her own home. Her close friendship with Barbara Baird offers a brief refuge, but when Jody’s father’s disturbing attention crosses a boundary, the cracks in Jody’s world begin to split open. Struggling to find anyone who will believe or even see the truth, Jody turns inward, realizing survival might mean severing ties with everything — and everyone — she once trusted.

  • Jody shares carefree summer days with Barbara while hiding her growing unease at home.
  • A chilling late-night encounter reveals her father’s predatory intentions.
  • Her mother, Janet, either cannot or will not face what’s happening, deepening Jody’s isolation.
  • Bonnie Baird, Barbara’s mother, catches glimpses of the truth but hesitates to act.
  • Jody records a secret cassette — her desperate insurance if she disappears.

ACT TWOAfter her father’s betrayal escalates, and her mother’s silence becomes a second kind of violence, Jody begins her quiet rebellion. She moves into Bonnie’s home, finds a small job at the local theater, and starts building a fragile sense of independence. Meanwhile, Bonnie and Jody engineer a whisper campaign to undermine Jerry Johnson’s reputation in the town he once ruled with a smile. The fallout begins to spread — cracks forming in a place that had long protected monsters behind manicured lawns and Sunday smiles.

  • Jody confronts her father indirectly by crashing his public image at work.
  • Bonnie subtly seeds doubt about Jerry among the town’s gossip chain.
  • Janet tries to patch over reality, clinging to the idea of family, even as she crumbles.
  • Jerry grows increasingly isolated as the town’s quiet judgment builds.
  • Jody formally severs ties with her parents — choosing survival over belonging.

ACT THREENo longer willing to merely survive, Jody makes a radical choice: to leave Redwater forever. In an emotional farewell with Bonnie, Jody acknowledges the scars she carries — but refuses to let them define her. Armed with nothing but a backpack, a pocketful of cash, and the fire of her own will, she boards a bus for Los Angeles. Years later, under a new name — Harper Hale — she returns not in shame, but in triumph, closing the circle with the woman who once saw her pain and stood by her when no one else would.

  • Jody gathers her strength, saves her money, and plans her escape.
  • A devastating truth about her mother's own teenage past crystallizes Jody’s resolve.
  • Bonnie and Barbara send her off with love and fierce hope.
  • Adult Harper returns to the town in mourning, offering Bonnie a silent but profound gratitude.
  • Their reunion stands as proof that even broken beginnings can lead to unbreakable bonds.

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