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I WAS 7

I WAS 7
By Daniel Doble

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

When a slick Manhattan executive is forced into mandatory therapy for his inappropriate conduct, he comes face-to-face with his 7-year-old self... in the flesh—sparking a surreal, heart-wrenching journey to reclaim the boy he abandoned and confront the truth he’s spent a lifetime burying.

SYNOPSIS:

Act One:

In 1972, seven-year-old Bobby Reynolds proudly finishes a woodshop project under the supervision of Father McKenzie — a day that will haunt him forever. In present-day Manhattan, Robert Reynolds, now 52, is a polished, ultra-successful real estate broker, obsessed with control and appearances. After an HR incident involving a client’s teenage daughter, Robert is mandated to attend therapy. During an emotional breakthrough with Dr. Keller, Robert meets an unexpected companion: his seven-year-old self, Bobby, materialized and persistent. Despite initial resistance, Robert is forced to confront the emotional child he buried long ago.

Act Two: Bobby refuses to be ignored, shadowing Robert through his cold, curated life. Robert tries to push him away, but Bobby’s presence reawakens old memories and vulnerabilities. Their bond deepens as Robert begins to lower his walls — fighting off judgment from lovers, colleagues, and even his own mother, Rhodes, a powerful socialite who orchestrated much of Robert’s childhood trauma. Robert and Bobby dream together of escape — not into fantasy, but into freedom. They find their vessel: a battered but beautiful sailboat, symbolic of Robert’s abandoned dream to sail the world.

Act Three: Robert severs ties with his toxic past, selling his penthouse and quitting his hollow career. But Rhodes retaliates, initiating a legal battle to sabotage Robert’s guardianship of Bobby. With DNA results confirming their profound connection, Robert races to leave Manhattan behind before old forces can reclaim him. During a violent storm at sea, Robert nearly loses his grip — until Bobby’s voice reminds him to let go. Robert finally surrenders, finding strength not in denial, but in embracing the child within him. Together, they set sail under the banner of "Father McKenzie" — free, imperfect, and finally whole.

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