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DEATH BY GAMBLE
By Darnay Cockrell
A teen poker prodigy wins $800K in one night at a secret gambling den—now the mob boss won’t let him leave.
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This sounds thrilling, Darnay Cockrell! And it's a unique poker/Crime story. I think your logline needs more info and a better flow.
Something like: After a teen poker prodigy wins $800K in one night at a secret gambling den, he fights to survive against a mob boss' armed guards.
That last part might not match your story though.
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