THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES

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EXIT STRATEGY
By Tyler Hill

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

After a trio of seasoned bank robbers pull off their latest heist, their carefully crafted escape plan goes sideways when they hijack the wrong getaway driver—an unassuming office worker who soon finds himself entangled in their high-stakes run from the law.

SYNOPSIS:

When a lonely office worker is taken hostage as a getaway driver by a ragtag crew of bank robbers, he finds himself unexpectedly bonding with his captors. But as the pressure mounts and paranoia sets in, the relationship fractures—culminating in an act of self-defense that leaves the driver desperate to escape. Thinking he can outsmart the criminals and turn them in, he soon realizes the real plan was to use him all along. Now framed, alone, and with a 9mm tucked in his waistband, his so-called “exit strategy” might just be his downfall.

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Maurice Vaughan

Sounds thrilling, Tyler Hill! I suggest having the office worker drive the logline since he's the protagonist. Right now, the robbers are driving the logline. And the protagonist isn't mentioned until near the end.

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