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Teenage graffiti artist use their craft to cope with the death of their friend, gang stalking of local police and the harsh circumstances of living in poverty. They alchemize their trauma and become millionaire philanthropist to bring community justice.
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A young group of artistic, talented kids from the inner city neighborhood of Los Angeles California experience the daily struggles of poverty, hatred and discrimination while growing up. In particular dealing with the treatment of the local police force that governed their community who swore to protect and serve, but instead demonstrated military tactics as if they were a tyrant gang tormenting and creating trauma bonds these kids would hold onto into adulthood, forever changing their lives and the community that surrounds them. Their only outlet was art. Graffiti art with spray cans and oil paints, vandalizing the city buildings. Though this art was a form of rebellion it served as a catalyst for the therapy they so desperately needed to cope with life as they knew it. After the death of one of the crew members by the police officers who targeted them, the children vowed to be the voice of the community, growing to be multi million dollar philanthropist and humanitarians breaking the generational curses of their forefathers. Based on a true story.The life of the inner city Los Angeles youth population.
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This sounds fantastic, Vedamarie Davenport! Your synopsis is in the logline section.
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Vedamarie Davenport, The concept is emotionally powerful and socially relevant, but the current form reads more like a synopsis than a logline. It’s too long and lacks focus, making it difficult to quickly grasp the core story. A logline should clearly highlight the main characters, central conflict, and stakes in one to two compelling sentences. Consider narrowing the focus to the key group or protagonist, the inciting incident (such as the death of a friend by police), and what they’re fighting for (using their art to spark change). Streamlining the language will help deliver a sharper hook while preserving the heart of the story.
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Thank you for your feedback. I will adjust as necessary
You're welcome, Vedamarie Davenport.
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