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TO FURTHER THE KINGDOM
By Steph Hartman

GENRE: Other, Drama
LOGLINE:

A burned-out believer, a pastor’s kid, and a group of misfit young adults with baggage and big questions launch an unpolished faith-based movement that shakes their city — and themselves — in ways they never saw coming.

SYNOPSIS:

In a world that feels louder, darker, and more divided than ever, a group of broken, questioning young adults find themselves drawn together by one thing: the undeniable pull of a God who still calls.

When Jordan — a former party boy turned unexpected believer — steps into a church for the first time in years, he doesn’t find answers. He finds people. Flawed, hurting, hiding people. Zoe, the pastor’s daughter crumbling under the weight of quiet depression. Daniel, an ex-gang member trying to redeem his past through music. Leah, a church kid-turned-runaway whose faith was shattered by betrayal. And more — each carrying wounds, questions, and a yearning for something real.

With no plan, no budget, and no clue what they’re doing, they launch a movement rooted in prayer, purpose, and radical love. Not everyone gets it — including themselves. But as their community grows, so do the stakes. Personal demons rise. Secrets unravel. And the cost of following Jesus becomes more than Sunday morning convenience — it becomes everything.

To Further the Kingdom is a raw, character-driven drama about what it truly means to live out faith when your past is messy, your future is unclear, and grace is the only thing holding you together. This isn’t about being perfect Christians — it’s about becoming willing vessels. And watching God work through the ones no one saw coming.

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I like the concept, I grew up in youth group. There is so much in a bible, u could add.. ok dueteronemy 14 has . No pork, no shellfish.. and Jesus says remember me w unleavened bread. Pork causes cancers, shellfish causes dimentia, and diabetes is starch in stomach acid becomes an antifreeze. How’s he know that? They could find out using the internet these facts and bring up why is all the people in church eating pork??? Especially on Easter when it says none four times.? Dueteronemy 14, Leviticus 11 or 22.. and twice in Isiah 65-70. Four times in a bible says no pork. Just like the tora and Quran.. no pork. It’s the main breakfast meat everywhere USA. It divides people when u tell them. People wanna fight. Oh.. the new testimate says I can eat anything…. Then why does Christ say to experience all the things the earth has to offer will keep you from eternal life? Why would u chance it? If something says something 4 times, that you memorized every other verse in, and you keep eating pork.. just skipping over that verse four times to say.. one vauge thing later in the book says anything goes. who’s not as religious as they believe. They read something they didn’t wanna read. But I love the taste?? Try turkey bacon, this is no time to wait??!

Did u know eel is highly toxic yet served in most sushi places. It’s the main cancer in Asia. Causes brain cancer at the brain stem and is what killed Babe Ruth w eel snacks.

There’s also questions of.. if Adam and Eve were first… then they had four kids.. how were more kids made? It says Kane moves on and has kids .. not w his sister, or mom, therefor they were not the first people?? If god made everything in seven days.. what’s he do after that and where did he learn to do these acts prior to everything.. where’d he grow up, the story has loose strings everywhere if u were to try and write it as a movie. Then at the end there is a city that lands on a hill, that’s square and has 12 entrances and is covered in precious gems.. diamonds are not listed. That’s a space ship.. and not that many wanna get on.. so going back to the beginning.. if we leave on a space ship, the beginning makes more sense of it being dropped off by a space ship. Let’s say they have eternal life.. so they know what to plant and what animals to put.. why put pork? Why put mosquitos? I think it’s a dna sequencer that creates all the animals.. two each.. and breds them All?? But what if it’s just people from a different planet, who have advanced things like a spaceship. How would u write a story to explain they dropped people off to repopulate a empty planet, and give a book that explains the ailments of 10,000 thousand years later?? These things divide a church based on “I love the way bacon tastes..”. How did Christ know diabetes cause?? He also says how the temple is destroyed and all the blocks cast to the valley below.. four years later it happened that way. He also tells pilot when asked are you god.. he says. “That’s what they say.. My kingdom is from long ago.” Explain that.?

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