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The H List- Feature Film (Current Project)
Sophie is a small town college girl who thought she had life figured out. Orphaned at a young age, she’s found solace in her supportive grandparents and close-knit community. Just as she prepares to marry Nick, her charismatic fiancé, everything crumbles with a single phone call.
As the walls close in, Sophie discovers that Nick's secrets and addictions won't let him walk away quietly. In her darkest hour, she begins a gripping faith journey, inspiring her to create The H List. With danger lurking around every corner, will she muster the strength to confront her past and embrace the love that could lead her to safety—and her ultimate happy ending?
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This concept sounds awesome and while writing this comment, I remembered what book series it reminds me of. James Patterson's "Women's Murder Club".
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While it's hard to find someone in a small Southern town who doesn't believe in God, it's rare that a script will invite Him into the Second Act. Where instead of the choices narrowing down, it opens it up. Classical 3-Act structure could then become passé.
As a proof-of-concept this film can expand and grow.
If your short is available, even if it is a work-in-progress, it should be posted somewhere we can all see it. :) Including contests/fests.
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