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Mia’s shadow awakens in a mysterious, shadowy world filled with twisted reflections and forgotten memories. As she searches for a cure to save her comatose owner, she encounters strange allies, eerie enemies, and the ghost of a boy named Oliver. But the deeper she goes, the more she realizes the forest’s secrets may change her—and Mia’s fate—forever.
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Sarah Saleh, this is a striking and imaginative logline that immediately evokes a strong visual world and emotional stakes. The idea of a shadow going on a quest is both poetic and original, and the “realm of living darkness” hints at a rich, metaphorical landscape that could explore deeper themes. To take it even further, you might hint at a unique obstacle or ally the shadow encounters, or clarify what’s at stake if time runs out. But overall, this is concise, evocative, and full of promise.
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