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THE 5 MINUTES

THE 5 MINUTES
By Petru Gradinariu

GENRE: Mystery, Drama
LOGLINE:

A renowned philosopher, speaking to packed halls, reveals the hidden mechanism behind the law of attraction exposing the subtle force that delays or blocks manifestation. His journey bridges quantum science, ancient religion, and spiritual awakening, unlocking a truth the world was never ready to face.

SYNOPSIS:

In a culture saturated with noise and superficial positivity,

Thomas Creed is a philosopher who dares to go deeper into the

silence, into the subconscious, into the places where

transformation actually begins. Widely respected for his

lectures on the emotional architecture of reality, Thomas

believes that what we think is not nearly as powerful as what

we feel especially in the final five minutes before sleep,

where the subconscious absorbs, interprets, and manifests.

But when his words begin to ripple beyond the stage,

affecting people in ways he never expected, Thomas is pulled

into a much more personal awakening. He meets Maria, a woman

once trapped in an abusive marriage, who transforms her

reality through radical gratitude. He reconnects with

VICENZIO, a fellow philosopher who lost everything to ego and

finds salvation in humility. His wife, Sophia, wise and

wounded, teaches him the difference between hope and faith.

And through it all, a young boy named Antonio, their adopted

son, watches as if he knows more than he should, carrying a

light from another world.

Then comes Vijai, a 13 year old immigrant boy who stuns a

packed auditorium with a plea not for himself, but for his

sick mother:

“Please, Mister Creed, tell my mom that God loves her and

doesn’t want her to die.”

What follows is a revelation not spoken, but felt a divine

resonance that reverberates through every soul present.

Interwoven through Thomas’s dreams is the recurring image of

a faceless Scribe, writing with a golden pen in a book of

infinite pages

The Scribe never speaks only responds to human emotion.

Grief. Joy. Fear. Gratitude. These feelings appear as written

words, and what is written becomes reality.

THE 5 MINUTES

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Petru Gradinariu Spiritual awakening is happening all over the world big time so I think your log line is perfect for this upheaval of what we've been led to believe. Brilliant! Have you got music written? DM me I'd like to hear more!

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