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PRETTY LITTLE LUCY

PRETTY LITTLE LUCY
By David Williamson

GENRE: Thriller, Drama
LOGLINE:

After being catfished by someone impersonating Lucy Hale, a disillusioned man loses himself in fantasies with her TV character, unraveling the line between fiction and reality.

SYNOPSIS:

David Williamson, 44, is stuck in the quiet ruins of his life—a burnt-out pharmacy tech trapped in a decaying marriage, ignored by his family, and haunted by dreams he never chased. When he receives a message from someone claiming to be Lucy Hale, it seems like a glitch in the simulation. But what begins as curiosity soon morphs into addiction.

Their late-night texts offer something he hasn’t felt in years: significance. As he falls deeper, David begins to confide in “Lucy,” exposing his emotional wreckage, his marital despair, and his desire to be seen. But the woman on the other end isn’t Lucy—she’s a scammer with a script. David knows this. And still, he chooses belief.

Meanwhile, his fantasy life intensifies. He doesn’t just picture Lucy—he imagines Aria Montgomery, Lucy’s alter ego from Pretty Little Liars, entering his world, whispering to him, guiding him, loving him. These hallucinations blur the lines between emotional need and mental fracture.

At home, David’s world quietly implodes. Ashley, his manipulative surrogate daughter, uncovers everything—his texts, videos, and obsession—and begins her own covert sabotage. She contacts “Lucy,” plants seeds of doubt, and sets David up for emotional exposure. The house becomes a quiet warzone of lies, whispers, and static-filled baby monitors.

As the deception escalates and David begins preparing for a fictional red-carpet invitation in Memphis, the delusions grow darker. Aria becomes more than a muse—she becomes an interrogator, a tormentor, a mirror. David is left questioning whether his love was ever real, or just a desperate man’s story written in the dark.

Pretty Little Lucy is a psychological descent into emotional vulnerability, identity collapse, and digital seduction. A surreal blend of truth and fantasy, it explores how far one man will go to feel loved—even if it costs him everything real.

PRETTY LITTLE LUCY

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Ashley Renee Smith

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Ashley Renee Smith

David Williamson This logline sets up a timely and psychologically intriguing premise with strong character stakes. The use of a real celebrity like Lucy Hale makes the deception feel more vivid and specific, while the spiral into “delusion, obsession, and fantasy” hints at a dark, possibly tragic descent. To make it even stronger, consider clarifying the genre and tone: is this a psychological thriller, a dark comedy, or a drama? Also, expanding slightly on what’s at risk or how far the obsession goes could give it more narrative weight and urgency.

David Williamson

Hi Ashley, This is actually a hybrid screenplay that is mainly focused on Psychological Drama, but includes Dark Comedy, Digital Horror and Thriller elements. This feature screenplay tonally rests between FX's The Patient and Netflix's You, but the antagonist is delusion. It's a very unique and personal experience to me.

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