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A vindictive pharmaceutical company with a plan to market confidence as a drug is taken on by the CEO’s estranged son and former employees’ daughter in order to stop the drug from causing an epidemic.
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Victor, a brilliant but tormented teenager, endures years of brutal bullying before a failed suicide attempt lands him in The Helping Hands Institution. There, under the mentorship of Dr. Charles Grant, Victor discovers the power of antidepressants, which save his life but ignite an obsession. Following Dr. Grant’s death, Victor vows to create a drug that not only lifts spirits but instills endless confidence. Years later, broke and desperate, Victor convinces his high school bully, now a pharmaceutical executive, to fund his dangerous project, “Confidence.” However, when the drug’s effects spiral out of control, unleashing chaos on the city, Victor’s estranged son Daniel and Selene—a former employee’s daughter—must band together to stop Victor before society is torn apart by the epidemic.
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Sounds like a pretty cool story.
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Thank you! Tommy Gallego and appreciate the rating :) Tasha Lewis
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You need to clarify who are the protagonist and antagonist. Victor is a villain protagonist, and his son is the antagonist the way the synopsis is written. Here's a more conventional logline: "When a troubled man creates a dangerously potent confidence-boosting drug with funding from his former high school bully, he must undo his mistake before it tears society apart." The son and Selene would be allies in his journey. This assumes he realizes it was a mistake and hasn't turned evil from greed. The way you have it, the son and Selene are the protagonists trying to prevent Victor, the antagonist from doing evil.
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That is a subject worth writing about! Good luck.
Thank you! Charles V Abela appreciate the words!
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