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A family’s luxury vacation takes a seductive turn when they’re offered a chance to join Va’rayha, an elite club for the rich and elite, promising limitless fantasies and tailored indulgence—until they discover it’s a covert crime ring where membership demands far more than money, and the true cost is a trap no one escapes.
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David Rosenburg, a ruthless billionaire obsessed with joining the ultra‑exclusive club Va’Rayha, goes on a remote island getaway with his wife Monica, daughter Zoray, and her boyfriend. The resort hides a secret underground world of luxury, temptation, and a glowing fortress marked “V.” Allowed a three‑day trial, the family enters Va’Rayha under the guidance of the enigmatic Elmira, bound by strict rules and separated into rooms tailored to their desires. But when a mysterious woman warns Sydney that Va’Rayha is a predatory organization that traps its members for life. He tries to pull the family out—until his own secret surfaces: he brought David here to trade him for his missing brother. As Zoray uncovers the truth behind the club’s criminal machinery, the nightmare suddenly snaps—she wakes in her hotel room, everything seemingly normal… until she steps into the hallway and comes face‑to‑face with Elmira, leaving her unsure whether she escaped a dream, a warning, or the beginning of something far darker.
Interesting premise Devon Callahan. I would consider being a tad bit more specific in the logline. What happens if the family doesn't escape? What is the goal of the club?
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