Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
After a freak accident transforms a college student into a vampire, he discovers that a murderous mayor holds the key to controlling his powers, but their collaboration comes at a cost: if he fails, he dies.
SYNOPSIS:
Nick Harper, a wayward college student, is traveling with his mother Vicki and two best friends, Gary and Devon, to the town of Binghamton to start a new chapter in their lives, when Nick is suddenly and unexpectedly hit by a car. On the brink of death, the mysterious, cocky, and easily irritable driver, Kiernan Vale, offers Nick a chance for survival. Unbeknownst to the group, however, Kiernan is secretly a vampire who is building an army to aid the flamboyant mayor of the city, Anton Markov, in controlling the entire city. The group brings Nick to Miranda, his girlfriend, and Kiernan's sister, at the university, where she helps Nick check in and get settled into his new lifestyle. Things don't go well for Nick, who ends up nearly burning his eyes out and killing an innocent man. The situation becomes even more heated when Nick's friend Gary becomes jealous of Nick's newfound powers and blames him for leaving their old life behind, despite not being ready to. Meanwhile, Kiernan's mother, Caprice, pulls both Kiernan and Laurie's strings to further her goals: eliminate the other vampires in the city and replace Anton as mayor. She injures Damian for trying to interfere and seeks out Kiernan for help. The group reluctantly takes Damian to Anton for help, where he offers Nick a solution to his predicament; by becoming a vigilante for justice that Anton believes the city desperately needs. Nick, furious over the loss of his father, agrees, setting forth Anton's plan to rid the city of crime and establish himself as the most respected figure in Parlor City.
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
1 person likes this
Unique concept, Joshua Viers! I suggest adding the explorer's goal and the stakes to your logline.
1 person likes this
Thank you!
1 person likes this
You're welcome, Joshua Viers.
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
Rated this logline