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THE SACRED SLEEP
By Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

GENRE: Fantasy, Experimental
LOGLINE: Five unlikely heroes summoned by the dream of the kingdom’s princess must overcome their differences to defeat the nightmares that have plagued humanity since the dawn of time.
Marcos Fizzotti

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Leonardo Ramirez 2

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Leonardo Ramirez 2

Love the premise Banafsheh Esmailzadeh. I would consider adding a specific goal for the heroes and stakes (what will happen if they don't achieve their goal).

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thanks Leonardo Ramirez 2, it's a new idea so still very much cooking but I know the sacred sleep itself is quite important. Probably the heroes will fight nightmares come true as long as everyone sleeps lol

Leonardo Ramirez 2

I really like the title Banafsheh Esmailzadeh.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thank you Leonardo Ramirez 2, so do I :) I like the idea of sleep being important to the story, not for psychological purposes but it's actually a crucial in-world mechanic. The main thing I know is that the name absolutely echoes in my head for a reason lol

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