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When Grace marries a British Army Officer in the turbulent 1940s, her hopes for a stable family life are shattered as she uncovers buried family secrets and fights to reclaim her sense of self amid betrayal, abuse, and the tragic loss of her child.
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This sounds intriguing, Tatiana Tierney! Fantastic job on the logline! You covered a lot in one sentence. LADY CLIFFORD is a biopic, right?
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Tatiana Tierney your logline delivers a poignant and emotionally powerful setup grounded in a rich historical context. The personal stakes are high, and Grace’s journey from hope to heartbreak creates a compelling arc of survival and self-reclamation. The inclusion of betrayal, abuse, and the loss of a child signals a deeply dramatic tone that could resonate strongly with audiences. To enhance it, consider highlighting a specific action or turning point: what does Grace do to reclaim herself? Clarifying the core conflict or the main obstacle she faces will bring even more clarity and drive to this already affecting premise.
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Maurice Vaughan Thank you, Maurice. Yes, its about Grace's (main character) life journey.
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Ashley Renee Smith Thank you, Ashley. The logline has been adjusted a bit in my beautifully created pitch deck of 14 pages and been complemented by a producer.
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Tasha Lewis Marcos Fizzotti Leonardo Ramirez thanks very much for your support!!
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You're welcome, @Tatiana. You might want to select "Biography" or "Historical" in the genre bar. I'm really looking forward to watching this!
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You're very welcome Tatiana Tierney. Love the premise!