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In 1989, a close-knit group of elite WWII veterans enjoying retirement must revive their lethal combat skills when a ruthless crime syndicate threatens their home.
*Comps: "The Expendables" meets "Back to the Future" & "Miami Vice"
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*Pitch deck attached for those who have been asking.
Thanks for the support! =)
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This sounds exciting, William! Great title and poster! And great job on the logline! I think "must revive their lethal combat skills" and "unleashing the retired dogs of war" are similar though.
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan. Great feedback!
You're welcome, William Holmgren. Can't wait to watch this!
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Pitch deck attached for those asking. Thanks for the support!
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