Great, catchy title, Daniel Silvas! I think your logline needs something that makes it pop. Is there anything about your story you could add to the logline that makes it stand out from other Rom-Coms?

Daniel Silvas, your logline sets up an emotionally resonant and character-driven story with universal themes of love, vulnerability, and healing. The setting of Las Vegas adds an evocative backdrop for a whirlwind connection, and the exploration of “the scars of their pasts” hints at emotional depth. To elevate the logline further, consider adding a unique element or obstacle that distinguishes this romance from others: what makes this fleeting connection different or transformative? A touch more specificity about the characters or their central conflict would help the story feel more grounded and cinematic.