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CATCH
By Daniel Silvas
A father and son struggle to connect through baseball, leading to a poignant journey of reconciliation and understanding on the day of an historic perfect game.
CATCH
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Solid logline except one thing, Daniel Silvas. I suggest adding an adjective for the protagonist (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality). And that'll help the reader know who the protagonist is. Right now, I'm not sure if it's the dad or son.