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POSTER GIRLS

POSTER GIRLS
By Christina Capra

GENRE: Historical, Drama
LOGLINE: A military wife teams up with a diverse group of women working in an environment fraught with racism and sexism at a southern wartime munitions factory in the 1940s.
Marcos Fizzotti

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Maurice Vaughan

Poster Girls sounds interesting, @Christina! I like the title, concept, and poster!

I suggest adding an adjective for the military wife (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality).

And what do the women team up to do?

Ashley Renee Smith

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Ashley Renee Smith

Christina Capra The setting, an all-female munitions factory during wartime, is rich with conflict and opportunity for character development. To make it even stronger, consider focusing on a central conflict or goal. What brings the women together beyond their shared struggles? Is there a specific event, challenge, or injustice they unite to face? Adding a clear through-line will give the story more forward momentum and help showcase its emotional and narrative stakes.

Mark Deuce

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Mark Deuce

LOOKS AMAZING!! I would watch this.

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