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Needing a scary Halloween costume for a first date, a college student rents a wedding dress from a hospice charity shop. With one condition: she must put the dress on and visit the original owner, a patient in the hospice. (5 pages, link to script PDF below)
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Intriguing, but what's the stakes? the conflict? the dilemma to be solved? I'd like to hear more.
Just read the script! Great short... you're a good writer.
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