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THE ELEMENTS: THE BIRTH OF NATURE'S SUPERHEROES
By Timika Shondel Chambers

GENRE: Adventure, Science Fiction
LOGLINE:

The last presumably Light Angel and outcast teenagers must harness their confidence and supernatural abilities together to save Earth from avenging dark angels and an erupting 66-million-year-old asteroid remnant.

SYNOPSIS:

Billions of years ago, harmony reigned among the angels on Planet Ur, the planet of time. But, an angel who turned to darkness after experiencing lost on planet Earth, seeks revenge on all of humanity until he realizes that Nature has a plan of its own to save it.

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Rose Scott

If the elements are the superheroes, why are the children the superheroes? Are the children elements?

Timika Shondel Chambers

Thank you so much Rose for commenting. Yes...Earth baptizes the children in its Elements to save itself.

Rose Scott

I am purposefully not reading your synopsis as you logline should ideally stand on its own. Is Earth personified? Who is responsible for the mass destruction? What is the form of mass destruction? Nuclear war? Pollution? A rogue asteroid? The connection between the use of “elements” in the title and “children” is not clear to me. If the earth is damaged, nature will fix it over time. Children aren’t necessary. Making children responsible for saving the planet is a heavy ask. It could seem almost immoral, if not presented in the right way.

Rose Scott

Sample Logline: In “Nature’s Superheroes: The Elements,” Earth awakens the latent powers of chosen children, transforming them into elemental superheroes. Tasked with averting a cosmic disaster poised to annihilate humanity, these newly empowered guardians must harness their extraordinary abilities to protect Earth and the universe from an ancient celestial threat.

Timika Shondel Chambers

Hi Rose! Thanks for the sample...definitely something to consider.

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