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When a young waitress, an aspiring chef, unlocks a magical gift — the ability to open portals through her cooking — she must follow the clues left by her deceased father to repay the debt he owes a vengeful real estate shark, one that threatens the lives of her mother, brother and her.
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Catchy title, Priya Balaji. Your logline is better. I just think the end of it could be tightened up some.
"When a young waitress, an aspiring chef, unlocks a magical gift — the ability to open portals through her cooking — she must follow the clues left by her deceased father to repay the debt he owes a vengeful real estate shark who’s threatening her and her family."
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