29 MIN sounds suspenseful and intense, Emy Dust. I think your logline needs a better structure though, and I suggest not putting a question in your logline. Something like: After/when ______ (the inciting incident/event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality) _______ (the protagonist’s title/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).

Maurice Vaughan Thank you very much for your advice, I'll have a closer look at the logline and fix it.

You're welcome, @Emy.