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THE PLAY'S THE THING
By Tucker Teague
A prodigal son, returning to his childhood summer home for one last gathering with his three siblings, has them all participate in an old family tradition so he can reveal a long-buried truth about their revered and domineering father, only to find that some legacies are too deeply ingrained to be rewritten.
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This sounds intriguing, Tucker Teague!
The logline is long (52 words). I suggest changing "has them all participate in an old family tradition" to "has them participate in a family tradition." That'll make the logline a little shorter.
And I think the last part of the logline is vague.
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Maurice Vaughan thanks!
You're welcome, @Tucker.