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"When an 8-year-old boy, desperate to escape the torment of relentless bullying, magically transforms into a stone hidden in a cave, his schoolmates must navigate a treacherous journey to find and free him before the cave collapses, forcing them to confront the consequences of their actions and seek redemption - or risk losing their classmate forever."
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Hi, Maria Caeiro. Your logline got better, but it’s really long (56 words). I suggest taking off “or risk losing their classmate forever” since it’s similar to “find and free him before the cave collapses.” That would make the logline 49 words.
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