THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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PLANE PAPERS
By Maria Caeiro
A bullied missing boy found himself immersed in a world of fantasy, forcing his classmates to confront their own roles in his pain as they race againsy time to bring him back.
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Hi, Maria Caeiro. Your logline got better, but it’s really long (56 words). I suggest taking off “or risk losing their classmate forever” since it’s similar to “find and free him before the cave collapses.” That would make the logline 49 words.
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Hi, Maurice Vaughan 5 Thanks for your suggestion, which is done, and for voting.
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You're welcome, @Maria.
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