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TITANS OF TOMORROW
By Sylvester Fryson Jr
In a divided future, two rebels must stop a war between mankind and the machines they created.
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In the year 2254, Earth is shared by humans and the towering sentient machines known as Titans. But peace is unraveling. As distrust festers and political forces push toward war, young engineer Julian “Jules” Jackson and activist Kaida “Kae” Morales uncover a plot to wipe out the Titans under the guise of protection. Thrust into a battle between governments, rebels, and the Titans themselves, Jules and Kae must forge a fragile alliance between species before both are driven to extinction. The fate of tomorrow depends on whether humanity can evolve—or destroy what it helped create.
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This sounds exciting, Sylvester Fryson Jr! It reminds me of movies like Pacific Rim and The Matrix. Your story has huge stakes. And it seems like you’re telling this story from the POV of humans and the POV of the machines. The movies that are similar to yours usually just show the human POV.
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In a future where humans and giant sentient machines live in peace on earth, the peace unravels and two rebels scramble to forge a new alliance between the species before they go to war and annihilate one another.