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THE SOLAR KNIGHTS: CLASH OF THE COSMOS
By Sylvester Fryson Jr
The Solar Knights face their ultimate nemesis in an epic showdown that will decide the fate of the cosmos.
SYNOPSIS:
In this end of this trilogy, The team learns about the return of the villain they thought they defeated, while overcoming their own personal issues, they must also get ready for the fight of their lives which will also determine the fate of the cosmos as we know it.
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Sylvester,
For starters
Cut
- All "CUT TO"
- "CONTINUED"
- What is described as TEXT under your slugline, it's almost precise the same line somewhere in the middle of your screenplay.
- ACT 1, etc
Do not try to be fancy with that stuff if you can't get your formatting right. And showing us that your screenplay consists of ACTS serves nothing.
You can easily cut your pagecount down to 116 if you clean up your bad formatting.
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