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HAWK AND THE PHANTOM
By Sylvester Fryson Jr
SYNOPSIS:
As leaders of M.O.H.A.W.K., Hawk and Zoey are training a new generation of enhanced recruits to protect a fragile multiverse. But when their trainees are systematically targeted by the deadly faction known as Zero Zark, they must act quickly to expose the enemy and defend the future they’ve worked to build—before it’s erased from the inside out.
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This sounds like an exciting superhero story, Sylvester Fryson Jr! "Sets its sights on M.O.H.A.W.K.’s future" is vague. I think your logline would be stronger if you made that clearer. Something like: Hawk and Zoey fight to protect their recruits and defend the future they’ve worked to build from a rogue faction that's set on _____ (the faction's goal).
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