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A timekeeper unites heroes from across timelines to stop the multiverse from collapsing.
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In a universe where dimensions collide, the fragile fabric of reality is threatened by mysterious rifts that are opening across the multiverse. Each rift brings forth heroes from different timelines, each with unique powers and abilities, but also faults and conflicts. The timekeeper of Ajax Infinity, Rasaun Martin, with a deep understanding of time and space, must unite these champions before the rifts consume their worlds.
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Talk about an Epic Story! WOW!!! I'd love to read the script.
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This sounds exciting, Sylvester Fryson Jr! And huge stakes! I think your logline just needs the inciting incident and one adjective for the protagonist/timekeeper (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality).
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