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In the wake of a brutal attack that decimated a royal kingdom, an unlikely trio—a royal droid, a discarded maintenance robot, and a fugitive, embark on a mission to locate the missing Prince.
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In this high-octane live-action adaptation of the cult-hit Netflix anime, a cheerful, royal-class friendship droid named S.A.M. embarks on a perilous journey across a war-torn landscape to reunite with her best friend, Prince Kelby, whose kingdom was decimated in a brutal surprise attack. Joined by a quirky maintenance bot and an infamous outlaw with a mysterious past, the unlikely trio races against time, dangerous foes, and their own chaotic chemistry to uncover the truth behind the kingdom’s fall—and Kelby’s destiny.
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This sounds like an exciting, epic Underdog story, Sylvester Fryson Jr! Great job on the logline! I think your logline works as it is, but if you want to make it even stronger, I suggest adding "perilous" to "mission."