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AN UNLIKELY LOVE STORY
By Jolynn Lauer
In this quirky, paranormal, LGBTQ+ rom-dramedy, retirees Marion and Amanda form a psychic-sleuthing business, which becomes the vehicle for their relationship. With the help of ghosts and spirits, they solve cold-case murders, bring closure to those left behind, and deepen their relationship with each other.
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Great first try but this is not a logline, research online what a logline has and doesn't have and try again. Best of luck!
I agree with Amazing Kacee. It sounds like a solid, unique premise. But I thought the logline read more like this is for a TV show than for a film. It sounds high-concept, but I'm with Kacee that the logline needs to be restructured to follow logline structure. Good luck and best wishes! I look forward to reading your revised logline :)
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Joe Eatherton, Thank you for our feedback. This actually IS for either TV series or streaming services--the first episode of 12.