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BURNING WATER

BURNING WATER
By Loren Davis

GENRE: Western, Action
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1880s Arizona. When a ruthless mining magnate burns his ranch and murders his wife, a reformed outlaw rides for revenge with his six-year-old daughter at his side—breaking his vow to leave violence behind as she watches him become the killer he swore he’d buried.

SYNOPSIS:

In 1879 Arizona Territory, wounded outlaw Tom Burroughs is taken to the isolated ranch of Claire Martin, who nurses him back to health and gives him something he has never had before: a reason to stay. He abandons his violent past, marries Claire, and builds a quiet life as a rancher and father.

Seven years later, Empire Mining diverts the water sustaining the valley's ranches, hoping to drive settlers from land it wants for itself. When Tom leads the ranchers to a rare legal victory against the company, Empire's owner, Marcus Blackwood, retaliates in secret. Tom's ranch is burned to the ground, and Claire dies saving their six-year-old daughter, Alice.

Devastated by grief, Tom faces a choice between honoring the life Claire helped him build or reclaiming the outlaw he buried years ago. He chooses vengeance. Joined by Claire's brothers, Wade and Jack, and shadowed by Alice, who refuses to leave him, Tom hunts the men responsible for the fire. With each killing, he drifts further from the husband and father he became and closer to the man he once was.

As Tom's quest leaves Wade and Jack dead and Alice increasingly frightened of the father she loves, he finally confronts Blackwood. When Alice begs him to walk away, Tom cannot. He kills Blackwood, is captured, and ultimately hanged for his crimes.

Years later, Alice recalls the father she lost long before the gallows. Though vengeance destroyed him, she carries forward the part of him worth saving. When she has a son of her own, she names him Tom.

BURNING WATER

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Loren Davis I would genuinely love to attend someday, but unfortunately I won’t be able to make it this year since I’m based in India. Cannes has always felt like such an incredible meeting point for cinema, distribution, financing, and international collaboration.

Would honestly love to hear about your experience there though especially how the market atmosphere feels this year, what kinds of projects people are responding to, and what trends or shifts you’re noticing in the industry right now.

Wishing you an amazing Cannes experience and some great connections there!

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