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After being wrongfully convicted of Murder, an adolescent is forced to serve in an experimental Penal Military Unit to turn the tide of a long, dragging war far from home. All alone, stuck with other twisted adolescents in the Corp, he has to decide who to befriend and who to avoid in order to survive. If successful, the Corps gets a full Pardon for their crimes.
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David Zelly, an adolescent is tried for the murder of numerous rioters who assaulted him and killed his little sister, tried as an adult to spend more years in prison than he has been alive. He quickly learns prison life, meets rivals and possible allies, only to be forcefully conscripted into a Penal Unit, using perhaps Desensitized Teenagers to pilot remote controlled drones as if it's a videogame.
For these Teenagers, Death will not be the only thing they will fear.
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Knighthood: The Archangel sounds interesting, Justin Groats. I suggest tightening up your logline. It’s 66 words and three sentences. Loglines are one or two sentences. A one-sentence logline sounds better, and it takes less time for a producer, director, etc. to read it. Try to keep your logline to 35 words or less. Long loglines can make producers, directors, etc. pass on a project.
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