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SUBSERVANTS
By Marc Nelson

GENRE: Thriller, Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

A brilliant scientist aims to develop a real-world role-playing game and crime prevention brain chip, following the murder of his sister, with money from powerful investors, that sets him on a collision course of corruption and control.


SYNOPSIS:

Subservants is a gripping sci-fi thriller that explores the ethical and moral complexities of advanced technology. The story centres on Michael Naiswell, a brilliant but conflicted scientist who creates a groundbreaking brain chip called Sciman. This chip promises to prevent crime and enhance human capabilities by allowing users to control others' actions and thoughts. Driven by the tragic loss of his sister Emma, Michael is determined to make the world a safer place.

As Michael tests his invention on Lucy, a homeless woman, he faces numerous challenges. His strained relationship with his wife Taylor and his father, Karl’s, disapproval add to his internal conflict. Meanwhile, Jack Mason, a shrewd businessman, and his tech-savvy partner Fred Pearson see the potential for control and power in Michael's invention. They invest heavily, but with hidden agendas that could jeopardize Michael's vision.

The series delves into the ethical dilemmas of technology, personal sacrifice, and the quest for control. As Michael navigates the complexities of his invention, he must decide between his groundbreaking work and his family. The stakes rise when Jack and Fred's true intentions come to light, leading to a high-stakes battle for control over the future of humanity.

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