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Series Title : Thomas
Episode Title : Marcus's Wish
Written: June 19, 2025
SCENE 1
Marcus's House INT
Marcus : How can i get Paige To Like Me? It is way too difficult, If i made love to her she wouldn't resist... i know without a doubt, she is mine. i'm not going to allow her to escape from me...(laughs)
The DoorBell Rings
Marcus : Who is it ?
Jill can be seen knocking on his door..
Jill : Hello Marcus, What information do you have on Paige Cole So Far?
i know how badly you want her,
Marcus : Yes, She is very hot, In My Mind I wish she was my wife.. i already hacked her personal computer and phone.
Jill : What? Are you an idiot? That's not how you win a girl's heart
i never heard anything dumb like that before. Shame on you Marcus.
Marcus : Shame on me? That's new. I just want a lover , you should stay out of my business.
I have more things to do than hear you argue about nothing.
Jill : Marcus, God damn it! i don't want to hear your mouth again...
Marcus Leaves
FADE OUT
SCENE 2 CAFE INT
Thomas : How do you Feel Paige, you seem exhausted.. Maybe Marcus pissed you off?
Paige : You are right, i am overwhelmed , Marcus is nothing but a dirty dog.
Thomas : I see Paige, you need to chill and relax...
Paige sighs
Thomas : What's wrong? what i said hurt you?
Paige : Shut up Thomas
Thomas : How dare you!
Paige : Yes i did say i was exhausted now leave me alone.
FADE OUT
SCENE 3
Jeremy 's House INT
Thomas : Well Jeremy, i blew it this time, i was too dumb founded to trust Marcus...
He's pure evil, and he knows this.
Jeremy : I can tell, he really pushed your buttons, Marcus has been evil for years since he left the military.
Thomas : Some way, Some how , I will stop Him.
Jeremy : How?
Thomas : By Taking his joy away...
fade out
SCENE 4
Streets EXT
Thomas : Show yourself Coward!
Marcus : Well hello Thomas, am i too powerful for you? i got paige and she is a beauty, everything ,
Thomas : Stay away from Her! She is my friend!
Marcus : Shut up, before i hurt you...
Thomas : you want to play rough Marcus... I will show you
Marcus laughs
FADE OUT
TO BE CONTINUED..
END OF EPISODE
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