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THOMAS (EPISODE MARCUS'S REVENGE)

THOMAS (EPISODE MARCUS'S REVENGE)
By Kiara P Oxley

GENRE: Animation
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Series Title :  Thomas
Written By : Kiara Oxley
Episode Title : Marcus's Revenge
DRAFT : JUNE 16, 2025
FADE IN 
SCENE 1
CAFE  INT
Thomas (VO):  It's a busy week for me,  Paige is feeling Depressed Because of Marcus, And I don't know what to do... It sucks but i have to be strong.
Thomas And Paige Sit down and talk, Jeremy thinks to himself
Jeremy :  Welcome To Thomas's Cafe, My name is Jeremy ,  how can i help you
Marcus Appears
Marcus :  My name is Marcus and i would want a mocha
Jeremy : Do you want it with whipcream?
Marcus : Yes, i love it
Marcus Pays for it
Marcus (OS):  Well Thomas,  I will be the new manager of the cafe, just you wait and see...
i'm better than you, and you should know that(Laughs)
SCENE (CONT)
Thomas :  Well Paige, Marcus doesn't seem to go away, he wants to be with you
Paige :  Are you serious? that man tried to kill me, because i refused to give him Sexual Pleasure.
Thomas :  That's not good, i will have a man-to man  talk with him and then he can finally leave you alone... he shouldn't control you like that.
Paige :  Well Unfortunately, Men have a impulse control they can't help it.
Marcus Interrupts the conversation
Marcus :   Well  Hello Thomas, Still looking for a beautiful lady... i don't think you will ever have one, i guess i could be right.
Thomas : What do you mean Marcus?  I already have a daughter , why are you so jealous of me.  you hardly know me. or what the hell i do.
Marcus :  Who the hell do you think you are? I am the new boss here, i make the rules ,  sit your ass down.
Thomas :  If you disrespect me one more time Marcus, I will ask you to leave the coffeeshop.
Marcus :  Boo-Hoo ,  Am I Scared. You are so Pathetic.  I am more handsome than you.
Thomas hides under the table
Marcus runs
Thomas :  Damn it, he got away, one thing for sure Paige, is to don't mess with him.
FADE OUT 
SCENE 2
Street/Phone Booth EXT
Thomas makes a phone call
Thomas :  Mr Mclean, Please Answer The Phone...
Mr Mclean Answers
Mr. Mclean :  Hello Thomas, what seems to be the problem?
Thomas :  Marcus Attempted to steal at my shop and he got away...
Mr. Mclean : Damn, he's dangerous!  If i were you i wouldn't chase him around i would call the cops .
Thomas :  It's hard to track him down, he is not an easy foe to deal with.
He tried to father a child with Paige.
Mr. Mclean :  What the hell?!   I am coming to see you in 5 minutes ,  we can stop him together.
Thomas :  Alright Bye!
Thomas  Hangs up
Scene 2(CONT...) BAR INT
Thomas  talks to a bartender, her name tag Julie can be seen
Thomas :  Hello , Bartender !  Have you seen a young white man  with long hair and green eyes? his name is Marcus Fisher
Julie : No i  havent.. what can i get for you?
Thomas :  Nothing, this man is dangerous. we must stop him at all costs.
Julie : Look, i don' t have time to do this , i will see you later.
Thomas (OS):  I'd be damned...
FADE OUT 
FADE IN
SCENE 3 INT(Marcus's Office)
Marcus's Phone Rings
Marcus : Hello This is  Marcus?
Jill:   What has that evil prick done now?
Marcus :  He tried to stop me from taking over the business... i feel sorry for him that he's a puny man without a life.  once i am able to run the business, he'll be gone .
Jill:  I don't know what to say Marcus,  I will Help you , He's no match for us.
Marcus (Laughing) : Yeah He's toast.
FINAL SCENE  
Thomas (VO) : This keeps getting dangerous, and with time running out, there is little to protect Paige, i am screwed
NEWS  ROOM INT
Diane :  Good Evening, This is Diane Lee, the public is still needing your help to find Marcus Fischer, he is wanted in the robbery of Thomas's Cafe and for the kidnapping of Paige Cole, do not approach if you see him.
FADE OUT 
Thomas (VO) : We can do this, I know i can.  Marcus's time will be over

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