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Series Title: Thomas
Episode title: Sweet Dreams
Thomas (VO) : it's Tuesday and I haven't seen Paige in a while. It's so scary to think that Marcus wants to be with Paige .. he's creepy enough to make Paige hate him.
Scene 1 int
Cafe
Thomas: Well Marcus... What's on your mind? And Why are you obsessed with Paige?
Marcus ; well she's my love.. I had to hack my way through.. I saw in her emails how men were to her. And I will have to get rid of you.(Laughs)
Thomas: get the hell out of my store you are banned.
Marcus: not if I have Paige.. I might have to kill you. I'm not the man who you think I am..
Listen up blonde I want the girl now ( yelling at him)
Thomas: look Marcus I don't have time for you.
Marcus disappears
Thomas: who is there
Marcus laughs
Thomas: who the hell are you?
Marcus (continued laughter)
Marcus: didnt people Tell You you need manners?
Linda steps in
Linda: well Marcus why are you so angry
Marcus: because I'm a stud and diabolical.(Snickers,)
Final scene
Thomas (VO) : Unfortunately in this world Evil exists, there is no escape... if only i could speak up, then things would be better.
Cafe INT
Thomas notices a young woman with Linda on her name tag, she approaches him, and has a smirk.
Thomas : Welcome To Thomas's Cafe how can i help you today?
Linda : Hi , I would like a decaf coffee and that is it ..
Thomas : Enjoy thanks for coming.
Linda : Has anyone told you , you look hot? I wish you were mine, I'm from Hong Kong... Maybe i can call you some time.
Thomas : Thank you , but i feel nervous, You're a beautiful girl, but you're not my type.
Linda : Is it because i am a little curvy?
Thomas : No, but i am glad i was able to see you, now you can go. get out of here.
Linda : But ...
Thomas : Just go!
Linda (OS) Men are so cruel, i don't know why , Thomas has a bad attitude with me , and i don't like it at all, shame on him
FADE OUT
Thomas (VO) : I hope i don't become Linda's Next Victim.
end of episode
SYNOPSIS:
In This episode Marcus explains To Thomas that if he doesn't allow him to see Paige, something Tragic will happen... arguing with each other Thomas has an idea to stop Marcus.
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