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SYNOPSIS:
Tyunna LeChell, 25, is a determined young woman chasing her dreams in the modeling world. When she applies at a high-profile Las Vegas studio, it feels like her long-awaited break. But what begins as a promising opportunity quickly turns sinister when she overhears a chilling exchange between the studio owner, Brad, and his trusted photographer. Realizing she’s stumbled into a human trafficking operation, Tyunna flees in terror—but now unknowingly being watched. Soon she’s stalked, and marked as a liability. Her cousin Nikki steps in putting herself at risk while her co-worker Anna disappears. Skeptical Detective Daniels doubts her story, but his partner, Detective Ward, seeks the truth. As the danger escalates, Tyunna is pushed to her breaking point. With the help of a protective neighbor and an unexpected ally inside the studio, she becomes the whistleblower the traffickers never saw coming. The Witness builds to a tense, multi-location climax—studio confrontations, tense chasing, and final evidence recovery—culminating in the criminals’ arrest and the victims’ liberation.
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THE WITNESS sounds thrilling and suspenseful, @Lakiesha! I think "must survive" and "silence her for good" are similar. Maybe change the second part of your logline to "she becomes the key witness and scrambles to expose the truth before they silence her for good."
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