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OLD FELLER

OLD FELLER
By Mark Deuce

GENRE: Action, Comedy
LOGLINE:

An aging hitman with cancer and his equally afflicted dog bust out of assisted living, kidnap a hapless hipster, and blaze across the desert for one last wild ride—hunted by cops, feds, and a vengeful mob boss in a darkly funny, high-octane race against their shared death sentence.

SYNOPSIS:

"Cancer gave them a deadline. They gave it the finger."

Eleavator Pitch:

"Picture this: Doc Ramsey, an 80-year-old hitman with cancer, and his dog Yeller, also dying of cancer, bust out of assisted living, kidnap a soy-boy orderly, and tear across the desert for one last wild ride. Hunted by cops, the FBI, and a mob boss with a 30-year grudge, it’s Thelma & Louise meets Bad Boys with a dark comedy edge. Doc’s a killer with a lethal cane, Yeller’s a sniffer who smells trouble, and their hipster hostage grows a spine. Gritty, funny, and raw—a cancer-fueled race to live free. Mid-budget, big heart, and a dog you’ll cry for. Interested?"

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

I would watch the hell out of this movie!

Mark Deuce

Thank you so much Banafsheh Esmailzadeh for your 5 star rating and very kind words!! I would too!!

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

No worries! It sounds like an absolute blast!

Mark Deuce

Cannot wait to see this one onscreen Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Mark Deuce

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Sylvia Melanson

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Sylvia Melanson

I certainly would want to watch this movie!

Mark Deuce

THANK YOU SO MUCH Sylvia Melanson for the 5 Star Rating and the very nice feedback. I cannot wait to see this one made soon.

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