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An anthropomorphic brain and his wildly contrasting friends group, clash at odds trying to find middle-ground in today’s society.
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I really like the title and artwork, Clifford Anzini. An animated series about organs. I'd watch that!
I think "don’t exactly live a “PC culture” type of lifestyle" is vague. I suggest telling what Brian and his friends do throughout the series.
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Nice Comment, Maurice!! Once again, you're spot-on!
Thanks, William Gunn.
Maurice Vaughan Thanks for the feedback man. I think you made a good point, I'll think of something a little more telling without it being a direct giveaway. Appreciate the feedback for sure though!
You're welcome, Clifford Anzini. I watched your pitch video. I can see this on Hulu or Adult Swim.
Maurice Vaughan Thanks bro, that's the goal!
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I really like the title and artwork, Clifford Anzini. An animated series about organs. I'd watch that!
I think "don’t exactly live a “PC culture” type of lifestyle" is vague. I suggest telling what Brian and his friends do throughout the series.
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Nice Comment, Maurice!! Once again, you're spot-on!
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Thanks, William Gunn.
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Maurice Vaughan Thanks for the feedback man. I think you made a good point, I'll think of something a little more telling without it being a direct giveaway. Appreciate the feedback for sure though!
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You're welcome, Clifford Anzini. I watched your pitch video. I can see this on Hulu or Adult Swim.
Maurice Vaughan Thanks bro, that's the goal!