THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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BARELY FUNCTIONING
By CJ Anzini
Desperate for mediocrity, a neurotic twenty-something spirals out of control as he’s dragged into chaos by his wildly contrasting anatomy of friends.
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I really like the title and artwork, CJ Anzini. An animated series about organs. I'd watch that!
I think "don’t exactly live a “PC culture” type of lifestyle" is vague. I suggest telling what Brian and his friends do throughout the series.
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Nice Comment, Maurice!! Once again, you're spot-on!
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Thanks, William Gunn.
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Maurice Vaughan Thanks for the feedback man. I think you made a good point, I'll think of something a little more telling without it being a direct giveaway. Appreciate the feedback for sure though!
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You're welcome, CJ Anzini. I watched your pitch video. I can see this on Hulu or Adult Swim.
Maurice Vaughan Thanks bro, that's the goal!