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Recent LA reviews:
“An ambitious and entertaining socially relevant drama and character study, with a good cinematic eye, strong LGBTQ+ themes and positive portrayals, a beating heart and layered emotionality at its core, HEROES boasts a promising, diverse, and inclusive cast and has the potential to find an equally diverse audience. Material radiates a solid indie vibe; Writer has a knack for layered ensemble storytelling, authentic gay life, ice hockey action, and rich interpersonal dynamics.”
“Honestly, the Reader sees this as a sellable story. It is original, well-written, and never tries too hard to be different. The tragedy of 9/11 is relatable, and the concept of what to do with the 2000 unidentified victims is horrifying. The universal themes of acceptance, diversity, and coming together after tragedy is investable. The script should be able to find a contemporary audience on a streamer. The theme is the area of the script that shines. The Writer takes the issue of people choosing not to identify many of the bodies of 9/11 victims, so they are left indefinitely in the morgue, creating a relatable problem. The idea that a gay hockey player and a firefighter with PTSD can find relief in creating a memorial and raising money from a hockey game between the two groups is original and compelling. It is a universal theme and relevant to today’s society.”