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An ex-biker gang leader, having traded his Harley for a delivery van, and his legend for a paycheck at mega-corporation Congo, gets one final chance to matter when the girl next door is taken by his nemesis - the only enemy he never truly defeated.
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This is one of those loglines that I wonder why it's not already made and my wife and I can watch after a hard-day's work Bryant Karnes . Great story. I would consider adding a goal for the protagonist and stakes if he doesn't reach it. But nicely done!
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