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SERRATED
By Julia M. Sauder
When three college co-eds go missing, a determined sister goes to rural Maine to search for them only to find she's in the middle of mayhem and voodoo.
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Interesting title, Julia M. Sauder. I like "a person searches for someone" Horror movies, so I'm excited for this.
I suggest changing "comes to "goes."
Instead of putting "something horribly sinister," I suggest saying what she finds herself in the middle of. A logline is a pitching tool/selling tool, so you don't want to be vague/hold back vital information from producers, production companies, etc. It might cause them to pass on the project.
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Thanks for the good suggestions, Maurice Vaughan !
You're welcome, Julia M. Sauder.