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Born a werewolf, a New Jersey teen contemplates the pros and cons of losing her virginity as she anxiously awaits her first transformation.
SYNOPSIS:
A wolf chases a LITTLE OLD LADY down a New Jersey suburban street, huffin’ and puffin’, only to leave her stranded and confused.
After decorating for Christmas, JAN, 16, is picked up by her older boyfriend, LUCAS, 19, and they head to his dorm for a “special evening.” Lucas wants to have sex with Jan, but she is not ready. While there, Jan discovers photographs of Lucas in bed with another girl. She snarls at him unexpectedly.
Jan drags herself down the street, and one of her BFF’s, WEEB, 17, picks her up in his car. They go to a diner where they discuss the break-up and losing their virginity.
Next morning, MARGARET, 17, Jan’s other BFF, meets up with them at the park on a snow day. Jan wants to meet a man worth losing her virginity to, and she enlists the help of Margaret & Weeb.
Jan has a secret that she confesses to Margaret – she could be a werewolf. She comes from a family of werewolves, but there’s a possibility she was born without the gene. Margaret has trouble believing her at first. Jan’s hesitant to change, because becoming a werewolf is just a totally crazy thing.
That night, Jan has a dream about turning into a werewolf. She grows loads of hair, her canines become super sharp, and she lets out a howl of an experienced wolf.
The next morning, Weeb tells Jan and Margaret that he’s got three tickets to paradise this Friday night – man hunting at the movies (the only real place to find a slew of boys under 21).
At the movies, Weeb wants to howl at the moon, thinking it’s full. Jan tells him it’s not (she’d know) and wants to tell him her secret, but Margaret hushes her up.
In the lobby, Jan looks very pretty, and all the boys check her out. Her confidence builds until Lucas enters with the girl that he cheated on her with. Jan breaks down in the parking lot - she thought she was over him.
Next morning, the trio meet up at the mall. Margaret has her friends reluctantly try on lingerie and various skimpy outfits to feel better, give them some holiday cheer, but the plan backfires when Weeb and Jan see each other in scant underwear. Awkwardness between the two follows.
At their diner, Jan and Margaret talk about the impending full moon and the need for sex.
That night, Weeb goes to Jan’s house to pick her up, but she doesn’t want to go out and would rather do homework (really, on a Saturday night?). Weeb complains that she’s been avoiding him, and they have an argument.
Annoyed at Weeb, Jan calls Lucas, and he convinces her to go out for a milkshake. He apologizes and gives her a silver necklace which has no effect on her. She might be normal after all.
They go back to his dorm and make out. Jan is more engaging this time.
Next morning, Weeb goes to Jan’s to apologize in person, but she’s not there. While driving home, he sees Jan together with Lucas and zooms away, 'effing mad.
At the diner, Margaret thinks she sees Jan with Weeb, but is surprised when she sees it’s Lucas. She sits down with them wondering what the hell is going on. Lucas goes to the little boys’ room. Jan and Margaret argue about Jan getting back with Lucas to make Weeb jealous. Margaret storms away.
Margaret goes to Weeb’s and makes him face the fact that he’s in love with Jan. She tells him that he has to do something about Jan and Lucas being back together. But Weeb can’t undo what’s been done. He can’t re-virginize her.
Jan discovers Lucas is still with the other girl. She rips off the silver necklace and throws it away.
Jan calls Weeb, but gets no answer, so she runs to his house, the full moon hidden behind the clouds.
As she’s about to apologize, Weeb blurts out that he loves her. Jan confesses she did not sleep with Lucas. They kiss.
The full moon shines through the window onto Jan, and she changes into a werewolf. She bites Weeb in the shoulder.
The next morning, they lie on the floor in the aftermath. Weeb realizes he is now a werewolf, too. He accepts his fate along with the extraordinary new amount of hair.
Jan makes amends with Margaret, and they return to BFF’s.
One month later, Jan and Weeb are ready for their first night on the town as werewolves. Their first stop, Lucas.
The End.
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