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A family and a convict framed for a crime he didn't commit must work together to survive criminals.
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WAR HOME
Mark Kendrick is a man who was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit, and one day he finds out he is set to be killed and escapes from prison and goes after the evidence that can clear his name.
Mark arrives at the home of a former partner and finds a new family living there, the Cutter’s: parents David and Melissa, and their kids Dana, Bea, and North. Waiting for the family to leave then breaks into the house, disables the alarm, and seeks out an item hidden in a wall, when the Cutter’s return and Dana sees him and screams and Mark has no choice but to take them “hostage” and promises to release them when he gets what he needs. North flees and Mark chases and David goes after him, and a cop arrives and helps David make an arrest, when North mentions the items and the cops open fire on them, Mark helps them inside and kills one and the other makes a call.
Mark reveals they aren’t cops and are part of the gang that framed him showing the items include evidence proving he was framed by politician Andrew Bates who has secretly been embezzling funds and secretly starting crime springs to create tensions and embezzling funds from the police and keep his criminal friends on the streets.
More gang members arrive led by Damson Kellver who used to work with Mark until he framed Mark for murder and a bombing, and Mark reveals the items can exonerate him and expose both Kellver and Bates. Kellver and his men try to break in but Mark and the Cutters manage to defend themselves easily fending off several of the killers, and Mark reveals he and Kellver used to be partners running a shipping business, but they accepted a deal from Bates believing it would increase their business but Mark found out they were shipping drugs, guns and bombs and Mark tried to back out but Kellver betrayed him, and helped frame him for murder and a bombing act and had him locked up for nothing.
The real police arrive, and a shootout occurs while David gets his family out and as Mark and Kellver engage in a final fight that ends with Kellver dead a news crew arrives as Dana, Bea, and Melissa air the evidence exposing Bates and proving Mark’s innocence.
Bates is jailed, and Mark goes free and starts up his old business but stays in contact with the Cutters.
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