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THE PERFECT BOYFRIEND STALKER
By Kevin Hager

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

A young girl is set up by her mother with a seemingly perfect guy, unaware he is more dangerous then anything. 

SYNOPSIS:

THE PERFECT BOYFRIEND STALKER

Tina Parks is a young girl and has a boyfriend in Manolo Ortiz much to her mother Linda Park’s chagrin who thinks that he is not good enough for Tina and he is a waste of time. Desperate to give her child a better boyfriend and soon finds one in a young man named Pierce Simmons and tries to set them up. However, Tina finds Pierce to be off and not her type, but her mother tries to pressure her into giving Pierce a chance, unknown to Tina, Manolo, and Linda when Pierce is alone, he begins to show a darker side.

Then acting on impulse Pierce begins to show Tina his negative side when Tina tries to tell Linda and her father John, Linda blows it off thinking it is nothing and convinces John to do the same. Then Pierce kidnaps Tina, and a search begins and Manolo suspect Pierce and tracks down his hometown and visits the police station and tells them of the situation. When they learn that Pierce lives there they contact the police station looking for Tina, and one of the detectives informs John and Linda that Pierce is not the youth Linda thinks he is: as it turns out he was a domestic abuser and his 3 previous girlfriends filed restraining orders against him for abuse, and that he lied about his job, career and education. Finally realizing Tina was right and that she should have listened to her daughter and the danger she had put her in, Linda finally begins to feel guilt, meanwhile Tina tries to escape Pierce with no avail, then he takes her to her home as he intends to marry Tina. Linda tries to stop them but is tied with John, and he wants them to bring a priest down to marry then, then Manolo ends up fighting him, and knocks him out, helping Tina, she grabs a teaser Pierce had used on her and uses it on him and kicks him down. When Pierce tries to kill them, Linda shoots him dead.

Linda finally accepts Manolo and learns her lesson, and he and Tina get married.

Abdusamad Shafiev

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